Prosecutors charged the second suspect in the homicide case. Today's lead in the Tribune read:
The second teenager charged in a string of violent robberies around the University of Chicago campus last week admitted in a videotaped confession to police to taking part in the crime spree, prosecutors alleged in court records made public Thursday.
Yuk...to the story and to the horribly-written lead... Is this even English? The lead of the story is supposed to draw the reader in, to make the reader want to read the rest of the story, not contradict everything that used to be beautiful about the English language.
How about this instead?
A second teenager confessed his involvement in a series of violent robberies on the University of Chicago campus last week, said prosecutors in publicly-released court records.
There. You get the gist of the story in a streamlined format with all the legally required info left in. Get to the mundane details later.
Another big thing in the Chicagoland news is a former Bolingbrooke police sergeant who is a suspect in the disappearance of his wife. Media coverage has included a personal view by People magazine and a heart-to-heart with Matt Lauer.
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Not contradict everything that used to be beautiful about the English language.
You get the gist of the story in a streamlined format with all the legally required info left in.
This is soo sexy and hot, the other night TMZ got a report that Rihanna was on her last girl on earth tour and she had a surprise visit from Eminem who performed their latest celebrity gossip hit together called, Love The Way You Lie. Rihanna is the prettiest female celebrities out in the music industry, she has had a large amount of celebrity sex tape scandals in her years as a singer song writer
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Rihanna has been in the news this week about her naked scandals images spreading quickly around the internet, it has propelled her music career to a whole new level, who would have known. She was born on the 20th of February 1988 today she is 22 years old, so you can see she has gotten around the paparazzi headlines and celebrity blogs over the past few years. Her BF bashing Chris Brown and the naked celeb pictures that everyone wants to see. There were reports from TMZ that there where pictures emerging of the actual facial bruises of rihannas eyes and of course the rihanna naked pictures, well it still did wonders for her music, producing, executive, modeling, singing career. Yes Rihanna has done lots of things in her life.
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Just questioning if eBay allows you to sell [url=http://www.ticketchoice.com.au]concert tickets[/url] online? Do you know if you will find any restrictions based on what country you are in?
My parents have just known as me and asked if i could "get rid" of their two tickets to some concert as they wont have the ability to make it due to yet another family event.
Besides asking pals etc, i thought ebay would be an excellent place to market them.
But whats ebay's policy on selling tickets? Ive heard alot about it for the news but ive forgotten what happened.
and if it matters, the concert is inside of this coming month
Thanks ahead of time for the advice.
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